Wow! Your readers get better and better. This was my first draft just as it came out of my head but I wanted to put it to test early. Many of the points raised are already taken care of in the second draft, but many new points will help me steer the growth of the…
I’ve just resubmitted. Hope my rewrite does your excellent, in-depth coverage justice. Yours is by far the best critique I’ve ever had on any of my script writing. As a former journalist and advertising copywriter, I’d always thought my writing style was tight…which is why I couldn’t understand why I have trouble keeping my scripts…
You were worth the money I paid you. I am inspired again. I know how to end the story. I know how to begin it. I know how to make it more than “consider”.
Of course it’s disappointing to fall in the “pass” category, but the on-line coverage and the script mark-up were really, really constructive. So many of the comments were phrased in ways that were instructive, not just corrective. I really learned a lot! I’ll be able to apply this advice to other writing projects, too. Often,…
The analysis I received was wonderful. My goal is to learn from this to the point that I can write a script that gets a (consider). I’ll send another by August. Your employees are great. Thanks!
Thanks for the Coverage. Just as I suspected. Your coverage was brutal, accurate and fair. Your knowledge of structure, character & dynamics blew me away! I can honestly say that I agree with 99% of your notes. I was glad when I finally got to page 61. It was the first page with no red…
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Remarkable and insightful coverage. Obviously, I was pleased that the reader was generally positive, but his challenges and difficulties are what pleases me most about the coverage. They were well-reasoned and important to me as a writer. What an absolutely wonderful level of impassioned professionalism! I will send a complete appraisal of the two review…
Hey Jim, thanks for the great review. Very informative. You covered a lot of things that I found were weaknesses, and hey, I’m self taught, so it really helped. I’ll definitely be sending you the next screenplay I’ve been working on.
Wow! Man, I can’t believe how detailed and thorough and professional this evaluation here is. But I guess you probably hear that a lot, huh? I recently paid to (script analysis company) and got back three pages of useless notes. So I was a little worried about trying another script company. Your gal (it is…
