Your Coverage Helped

I’ve just resubmitted. Hope my rewrite does your excellent, in-depth coverage justice. Yours is by far the best critique I’ve ever had on any of my script writing. As a former journalist and advertising copywriter, I’d always thought my writing style was tight…which is why I couldn’t understand why I have trouble keeping my scripts under 140 pages. Your coverage helped me get this one script down to 118 from 139 pages, and I’m about to tackle rewrites of some others. I acted on about 80% of your suggestions, and I’m really happy with this draft…but then, I was pretty happy with the first draft, too. Can’t wait to see your comments on the rewrite. Thanks.